Oh for the grains to make such a new dame
I'd put myself and you to shame.
All it would take would be just one kiss,
presented in a concert hall,
set to a tune of irony and slapstick ballyhoo.
But alas, the stage was not made for two mutants like us--
two waddling wayfarers unnanounceable because of our nation's trade.
Perhaps if we met at the parade,
Getting lost in the marching band, composing and conducting our own irhythmic display,
We could whirl past them in a daze of unnacountable desire,
And, in your case, deserved retreat,
A duet of spectral enmity,
A divinity without harmony
For the band to use as its base.
The creation of confirmation is the job of two rested hearts,
But it is consummation that I am after,
And that can only be created with the fortitude of one.
And my fortitude, I'm afraid, is locked away in a different tube--
The one that moves from my arm to my wrist to my hand to my pen to this page here--this place that I've come to divine to be the only wall for my tears.
I'd put myself and you to shame.
All it would take would be just one kiss,
presented in a concert hall,
set to a tune of irony and slapstick ballyhoo.
But alas, the stage was not made for two mutants like us--
two waddling wayfarers unnanounceable because of our nation's trade.
Perhaps if we met at the parade,
Getting lost in the marching band, composing and conducting our own irhythmic display,
We could whirl past them in a daze of unnacountable desire,
And, in your case, deserved retreat,
A duet of spectral enmity,
A divinity without harmony
For the band to use as its base.
The creation of confirmation is the job of two rested hearts,
But it is consummation that I am after,
And that can only be created with the fortitude of one.
And my fortitude, I'm afraid, is locked away in a different tube--
The one that moves from my arm to my wrist to my hand to my pen to this page here--this place that I've come to divine to be the only wall for my tears.
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Re: Hear is a bad poem about this girl I know
Mon, April 21, 2008 - 3:11 PMI once knew a girl or should I say she once knew me?
artists.letssingit.com/abando...bfdm67g
A tilted friend is often
The mouse to the cat of the pen
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Re: Hear is a bad poem about this girl I know
Sun, April 27, 2008 - 6:43 PMbad. especially bad. -
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Re: Hear is a bad poem about this girl I know
Fri, May 2, 2008 - 5:34 AMbad. especially the bad part -
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Re: Hear is a bad poem about this girl I know
Fri, May 2, 2008 - 9:41 PMThe way 'tube' just sits off rhythm and off rhymed with fortitude clearly says everything there is to say about fortitude. And then, gives it all up with the shin bone ankle bone knee bone conclusion eulogizing the poet's frantic tear-choked masturbation -- a run on double line wraparound bringing this overripe paean to love to a shockingly banal climax.
The only thing that could make this worse would be some allusion to a clown or juggler; though its possible the subliminality of the juggler is what keeps this careening toward a forever lowering category of bad.
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