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Note the last lines as follows:
"And if it comforts you..
I'll sleep with you...
And we'll fight your demons together..."
Not saying the poem was bad per se...just that it might be a typical bad poet scam...and it is amazing how the last stanza can just ruin an otherwise interesting thought...or, perhaps that was the most interesting part of the thought and it took a seeming eternity to get to the kernel of this nut?
Note the last lines as follows:
"And if it comforts you..
I'll sleep with you...
And we'll fight your demons together..."
Not saying the poem was bad per se...just that it might be a typical bad poet scam...and it is amazing how the last stanza can just ruin an otherwise interesting thought...or, perhaps that was the most interesting part of the thought and it took a seeming eternity to get to the kernel of this nut?
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Re: Dating Game?
Sat, March 21, 2009 - 7:26 PMThere' a good bad poem title, now lets have the rest. -
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Re: Dating Game?
Sat, March 21, 2009 - 9:29 PMOr maybe a Bond girl: "Mr. Bond, let me introduce you to my assistant--Plenty O'Nutton. Plenty, Mr. Bond." Can we turn the ensuing dialog into a poem? -
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Re: Dating Game?
Sun, March 22, 2009 - 3:34 PM"Enchante, I'm sure." said she as she smacked her gum.
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